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Friday, 16 March 2018

What makes kawakawa primary a good school.

This week room 5 and 6 have been writing about what makes Kawakawa a good school for a lunch shout from new world which you could sign up for. Just go to Thehits.co.nz and write a peice of writing saying what you love about your school. I hope you enjoy my peice of writing and maybe you could get a few tips for your writing.


What makes kawakawa primary a good school.

Opening statement- Why is Kawakawa Primary School special. Kawakawa Primary is special because
our three values that we use at our school. Also considering we know a couple of famous
sports star. And last but not least our chromebooks and ipads.
Body- There are loads of cool, fun, interesting and other good facts about kawakawa primary.
The most important our 3 values called the 3rs ( respect, responsible, and resilient) everybody learns
about these values every year which sure everybody uses during their time at kawakawa
primary.


Another reason not that popular. we are connected to a few sports stars that used to come to
kawakawa primary not that long ago including Blair tuke who is a sailor, Jack and josh that play rugby
and a couple of others (no need to brag about it).

And last but not least our chromebooks that Kawakawa get to use. Usually other schools have to use paper and pen. But not this school. Kids at Kawakawa Primary school get their very own chromebooks. At this school kids get to use chromebooks year 4 to 8. And  year 1 to 3 get to use Ipads. Kawakawa Primary use chromebooks for loads of things including there own blogs and other fun and school stuff. Chromebooks are used everyday and some even got to take theres home.

1 comment:

  1. You have some excellent reasons for why Kawakawa Primary is a great school. You also have good structure for your Explain writing. Maybe next time use passive voice, so take out the I, me, my, we etc.

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