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Wednesday 18 December 2019

S.L.J- Achieving our Dreams (A:3/D:3)

6 comments:

  1. Hello there Payton
    Its Kahukura from Nga Rau Puawai, I really enjoyed reading
    your blog post.
    It is very detailed and has a lot of great information.
    Maybe you could work on having a clear font so that you
    can see the words properly. But other than that great post.
    Check out my blog @http://kpskahukurah.blogspot.com/
    Blog you later bye :)

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  2. Hi Payton it me Thomas from room 7 I really like the is said don't let people weigh you down really fascinating next time you should make the writing bigger because I couldn't really see.
    Check out my blog Kpsthomass.blogspot.com blog you later

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  3. Kia ora Payton! I'm back! It's Olive here. How's your afternoon going?

    Thank you for a lovely blog post! I really like your font, it's super cute and cute and curly! Is it your favourite font? You've said a lot of positive things that I think will go along way with your brother. He'll have to work hard and believe in his dream but with advice and support like yours, I'm sure he'll have no problem getting there! You are obviously a wonderful sister with a lot of creativity and enthusiasm! Ka pai for all your effort and keep up the great work!

    Remember you can comment on other bloggers’ posts for extra points!

    Merry Christmas and have a happy New Year - us blog commentors will see you all in January! Have fun and be safe.

    Ngā mihi,
    Olive

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  4. Hi Payton, my name is Yazmin and I’m a year 6 from Paihia School. I loved reading Achieving Our Dreams Activity 3. I really liked reading about how you want to be on the Silver Ferns one day and talking about all the things you know. I learnt something out of all of the text you wrote, it was that every player on the Silver Ferns had to train and train to earn a place on the team. I loved reading all of the text it was really interesting and i really enjoyed it. Thanks for giving me a tip of how to do it. What else could you add to this text?

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  6. Hi Payton Its Tahlya This is such a great blog Post and it Has so much detail and It has so much information which is really good im so happy your doing so well Love you Lots Bye

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